Write an essay about Vancouver.
Vancouver is a popular city for tourists. There are many things to see and do here. You can visit many beautiful natural sites, shop at many locations or eat food from around the world.
First paragraph: natural sites
Second paragraph: shopping
Third paragraph: restaurants (international, etc.)
An example for topic sentence for first paragraph for natural sites:
If you love nature, Vancouver is the perfect city to visit. (Topic Sentence)
Supporting sentences:
You can enjoy the beautiful natural old forest and a walk around the seawall in Stanley Park. You can scare yourself to death walking across the Capilano Suspension Bridge, or you can hike up or take a cable car up to the top of Grouse Mountain and enjoy the panoramic view of Vancouver below.
Concluding and transition sentence:
When you want a change from all that natural beauty, you can take some time to shop.
(first part is concluding and repeating the idea of nature from topic sentence; the second part introduces the topic of the next paragraph - shopping)
If you love nature, Vancouver is the perfect city to visit.You can enjoy the beautiful natural old forest and a walk around the seawall in Stanley Park. You can scare yourself to death walking across the Capilano Suspension Bridge, or you can hike up or take a cable car up to the top of Grouse Mountain and enjoy the panoramic view of Vancouver below. When you want a change from all that natural beauty, you can take some time to shop.
Here are examples of transition sentences from paragraph 1 (nature) to 2 (shopping):
Not only can you visit beautiful sites, but you can also shop.
Nature sites are wonderful, but you might enjoy a change like shopping.
When you are finished enjoying nature, you can always go shopping.
Here are examples of transition sentences from paragraph 2 (shopping) to 3 (restaurants):
After a day of great shopping you may be hungry.
When all your fantastic shopping is done, you might want to find a restaurant.
All that shopping can make you hungry.
A busy day of shopping is over and you need to eat.
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